My I am Poem

Some thing that I enjoyed is my I am poem.
I liked it because it tells what I like and what I don't like. It describes everything about me.
Something that was hard was what to write in my I am sentences because that is the best word about me . My favourite bit is pretending with my bruther. My most favourite bit is my bit about being a paleontolojist.
I used  disckribing words to make my store sound more interesting and more real.

I am…

Success Criteria

Use a thesaurus to choose the best vocabulary

Choose the best nouns for the poem

Choose the best adjectives to describe some nouns

Leave the reader thinking about your poem by sharing what it inside you

I am adventurous

I wonder what i'm going to get from Auckland

I hear the kids that come over playing

I see my Nan at home time near the little kids class room

I want to by a finger bike in Auckland

I am adventurous

I pretend with Jesse that were (we’re) in a ship

I feel excited about going to Auckland because mum got cheap flight’s

I touch the keyboard on my computer it sounds like me gently tapping a door

I worry about how many times we had to stay in at lunch last year

I cry if I hurt myself

I am adventurous

I understand that boles (bullies) are mean people

I say good morning Mrs  Ramsey, Mrs Hill and Miss Jackett every morning

I dream of when i'm a paleontologist

I try to rid (ride) roller blades

I hope I can find a finger bike

I am adventurous

Model

I am a thinker, I am different

I wonder if people believe in themselves?

I hear the sparkle kind people bring to the world

I see animals teaching us each hour

I want to fix but sometimes I can’t

I am a thinker, I am different

I pretend to be a fairy twinkling about

I feel so content when people flourish

I touch silky fur and smile

I worry what others might think

I cry when people are distressed

I am a thinker, I am different

I understand that we are stars always ready to twinkle

I say what I believe (sometimes)

I dream of unicorns, mermaids and pixies

I try to make a difference

I hope that most days I do

I am a thinker, I am different