Abandoned Barn

Have you ever been in a 100 year old abandoned barn? I have.We parked in front of an abandoned barn Jesse and I rast(raced) to the front door waiting for Dad.ceaferle (carefully)we opened the big sliding door we walked inside.It was cold and dark as we entered the bilding. It smelt of an wooling shed it realy smelt of sheep.As we walked arond we fond some mishens.the mishens were yoused for shearing the sheep.As we looked aroned we fond some old wool and when I toched it it felt soft.When we poshed on a door it creed(creaked) open .I look in the litte room the floor was like a cadel(cattle) stop that had a hole in it.It was not dark because there was no roof and the sun was shining in. The barn was in good order because the heritage people have been looking after it. We saw another door  we opend the door there was old  timber and a bone.The bone was shaped like a leg bone I think it belogd(belonged) to a sheep. I jumped over a litte fens and went done(down) the sheep run when I squeezed done it it got smaller and smaller.When I squeezed to the end dad said “time to go” I jumped out.Before long dad saw some sheds ofer(over) in the other padick.We jumped the fens and ran to have a look.When we reched  shed we saw some doors behind the doors were two old toilets.They had wooden sets that were molde but they looked like they were new.Then it was reale time to go because we had to go to our next desternashon and have lunch at a river.It was fun exploring the abandoned barn.

Jesse and me in the abandoned barn 

I am proud of my writing because I try my hardest on it and made some changes on my sentence starters. I am also proud of my writing because it had lots of detail.

Something that challenged me was my sentence starters.

Something I am learning is maths.
I am leaning to split the numbers to find out the answer.
Something that was hard is figering out the answer for 99+6=.
The learning muscle I was stretching was my perseverance muscle.
I am proud of my maths because now I done't need the sticks now.
Today in Maths I used my perseverance learning muscle to subtraked.

Totara has been learning about Matariki. Matariki is about being together with your famerle (family) and friends.
Did you no that Matariki is the molde (Maori) New Year.
Matariki is also nowen (known) as the 7 sisters or the seven stars.
The name of the stars are Tupu-a-Nuku, Tupu-a-Rangi, Waiti, Waita, Waipuna-a-Rangi and Ururangi.
There are many ways to celebrate Matariki. You can celebrate Matariki by building kites, planting plants, telling stores and cooking food to share.

Bread

In science we were learning how to make bread because we were seeing how yeast activates.
After, we waited for it to rise.  Before we put it in the oven we had a look and it looked like porridge.
When it came out of the oven it had risen lots.
I put jam on it.
When we ate it it felt warm and flufe (fluffy).

Introduction:

Me and my dad were going to make hot dogs at the beach but we had no bread so

We went to the nearest 4 square and bort flower and sugar and yeast and oil but

We didn't need to by warm water because we had some in our bag.we cooked our

Bread with our small aven.Did you know that flour is the most important part of bread?

Allso the ancient egyptians came up with flower.

Allso scientist neither knew how yeast came apart in bread.

Have ever made bread?

this is my werk

Ingredient’s:

1  and 1 third cup Flour

1 Tbsp Sugar

1 tsp Yeast

1 tsp Oil

half cup Not hot water

Method:

1.Tip the flour into a bowl

2.Pour the sugar in the same bowl

3.Combine the yeast

4.Mix the oil in

5.Blend in the warm water  [NOT HOT!]

6.Stir for one minute

7.Get some cooking paper and cooking spray and spray the paper

8.Take the dough and put it on the cooking paper

9.Knead the dough but not for too long

10.Then leave it to rise

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Art

I am learning to blend the paint in so the mountains look real.

I am proud of my castle art because it look like a real castle.
Something that has challenged me is blending in the colour.
I am proud of my caste because some of the mountains look close up and some are fare away
the most easiest bit was doing the die.The die(dye) is the sun set colour.

                                

My I am Poem

Some thing that I enjoyed is my I am poem.
I liked it because it tells what I like and what I don't like. It describes everything about me.
Something that was hard was what to write in my I am sentences because that is the best word about me . My favourite bit is pretending with my bruther. My most favourite bit is my bit about being a paleontolojist.
I used  disckribing words to make my store sound more interesting and more real.

I am…

Success Criteria

Use a thesaurus to choose the best vocabulary

Choose the best nouns for the poem

Choose the best adjectives to describe some nouns

Leave the reader thinking about your poem by sharing what it inside you

I am adventurous

I wonder what i'm going to get from Auckland

I hear the kids that come over playing

I see my Nan at home time near the little kids class room

I want to by a finger bike in Auckland

I am adventurous

I pretend with Jesse that were (we’re) in a ship

I feel excited about going to Auckland because mum got cheap flight’s

I touch the keyboard on my computer it sounds like me gently tapping a door

I worry about how many times we had to stay in at lunch last year

I cry if I hurt myself

I am adventurous

I understand that boles (bullies) are mean people

I say good morning Mrs  Ramsey, Mrs Hill and Miss Jackett every morning

I dream of when i'm a paleontologist

I try to rid (ride) roller blades

I hope I can find a finger bike

I am adventurous

Model

I am a thinker, I am different

I wonder if people believe in themselves?

I hear the sparkle kind people bring to the world

I see animals teaching us each hour

I want to fix but sometimes I can’t

I am a thinker, I am different

I pretend to be a fairy twinkling about

I feel so content when people flourish

I touch silky fur and smile

I worry what others might think

I cry when people are distressed

I am a thinker, I am different

I understand that we are stars always ready to twinkle

I say what I believe (sometimes)

I dream of unicorns, mermaids and pixies

I try to make a difference

I hope that most days I do

I am a thinker, I am different

Camp Omatua

The judges choosing whose is the best back pack 

                       My biggest challenge was figuring out our plan for making a back pack.
                       One of my favourite things was wallking in front of the judges.
                       My biggest achievement is being the model.
                       Something I really enjoyed is wundering (wondering) wot (what) the judges will say.

                      My biggest challenge was making the wheels tern(turn) .

                      One of my favourite thing was macking (making) a car out of cogs.
                      My biggest achievement was trying hard .
                      Something I really enjoyed is playing with my car .

Us looking at the boundary's 

                        My biggest challenge was trying to call back the kids that ran off into the bamboo jungle. One of my favourite things was seeing the bamboo jungle.
                        Something I really enjoyed was seeing the river.

Ben eating a brussel sprout

                            My biggest challenge was trying to not get scared.
                            one of my favourite thing was getting scerd (scared).
                            my biggest achievement is giving it a try.
                            some thing I really enjoyed was seeing the kids pull faces.

as making our tea

                       my biggest challenge was trying to find a spot to make my burger.
                       one of my favorite thing was eating my burger.
                       my biggest achievement was making a burger.
                       something I really enjoyed was making my burger.

Our team playing socker (soccer) 

                            My biggest challenge was trying to score a goal.
                            one of my favorite thing was geting a goal.
                            my biggest achievement was trying.
                            something I really enjoyed was going for a tackle.

me pooling my weirdest fase (face)

                         My biggest challenge was geting some chocolate on the chocolate game because i coldent  get changed quick enough.

                         One of my favorite things was tubing down the river because it was exciting and I felt like i was going to fall off.

                      Something I really enjoyed was going down the water slide because I kept sliding into the mud.  

our mummy that we dressed up in toilet paper